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Hi there,

I’ve been working mostly on textures and developing the surroundings.
I’m kinda stuck with greenery development… I’m working on 3d grass on the area beneath
my structures but I’m really not sure it’s working for me plus it’s all very
far so I don’t know if it’s necessary… maybe you got some ideas of how to
make it look better.

about my structures I’ll need to add some more apartments but I’m wondering if I should
keep my second structure empty.

so basically if you guys have any suggestions or pointers I’d love to hear it.

10x Maayan.

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ShyBegleiter 12 pts

Hi Maayan,

The grass is green and cool, don't worry about it. In any case, If you need any tips on Autograss or MulityScatter, I will be happy to assist.

If I was to suggest something, maybe turn the right building by 90 degrees so we would all enjoy another perspective of the structure.

Being even wilder, moving the camera much closer to the left building would might give you much more dramatic scene and a chance to show some of the interiors. When doing that, rotating the right one might not be necessary.

Well, it's all inspiering and interesting! Looking good so far!

Best of luck!

Skuba

studiomaayan 6 pts

ShyBegleiter

Hi Shy, 10x for the tips... i actually changed the grass a bit since then u can check it out here: http://cdn-citylife.ronenbekerman.com/citylife/files/2011/11/PostTest2.jpg i used Itoo software. about changing the angle it sounds good... I'm gonna try it maybe on the other shot with different season... maybe go for something more dramatic season wise. anyways you gave me some cool ideas... 10x again :)

ChristianMiranda 44 pts

Hi Maayan. Nice progress...I like the textures on your structure and the variation on the appartments. The lighting is not very clear to me. Are you going for a dusk shot? I miss some contrast on the lighting. What kind of lighting set up are you using? Hdri mapped to a dome light? I will make sure to check your updates. Good luck!

studiomaayan 6 pts

ChristianMiranda

Hi Christian 10x for u'r feedback. about the lighting yea... i was aiming for a dusk shot but i get u'r point it is lacking serious contrast. im using HDRI assigned to dome light... im gonna try and work on it more. more to come soon...

Lovro 6 pts

Interesting concept. Think it would look good if there would be at least something happening in the other structure. Maybe fill just a few slots and leave others empty?

studiomaayan 6 pts

10x for the advice i agree... im gonna need to build some more apartments and also show one on the move so my concept will be more obvious